Question for interest

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I know how a forum works. I manage enough to know the ins and outs and yes, not everyone will reply if everything there is to be said has been said, but when asking a question and only a handful give their opinion, it tells me that most people are not bothering with this subforum that also have an account.

View count will rise too when search crawlers (aka spiders) view it, and some people read it but don't actually have a forum account.

Given the unusual nature of the story, I needed to ask first and so far all signs points towards this forum not wishing this much diversity. Which is totally okay. I am glad I asked first.
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kinbaku wrote:Look at the Views
Best indicator about how it's appreciated, even if few or no people comment.

The reason they might not be posting a comment may be that they're still mopping up drool (and other secretions :wink: ) after reading the story. :mrgreen:

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kinbaku wrote:
Slave_L wrote:The story may include humiliation and other forms of bondage, but unless you are into kink, you would not know this is a kink oriented story. Anyone could read it, possibly even a child, but only you with your kinky mindset would get excited when the story moves a bit into the kinky world.
Something like: What do you see?. :rofl:

When I travel by train and see an old castle pass by, I sometimes think there are people chained in the dungeons of that castle. To fellow travelers I'm just another traveler, but to someone who could read my mind I'm a kinky person who needs to be locked up right away. :mrgreen:

You could write a story for children with line numbers and an appendix to the story for adults with the same line numbers, but where you describe the actual kink story.

Ex:
349 They looked at each other kindly.
350 Their hands slowly joined together.

349 They represented the other naked.
350 They clutched each other tightly.
I think this is a very interesting idea! I bet that most 'normal' people don't even know what shibari or kinbaku means. I think we all overestimate the general population to some extent. Ballgag most know, but what about Armbinder, double column tie, box tie etc.

It is weird being a kinky person. It is like you are invisible, but only other kinky people can see you. What the hell is shibaru? You meant Subaru? I also heard some mid 20s strangers talking about bondage. They said something like 'why the hell would you want to be tied up? That makes no sense??".

But being back on topic I guess it could be possible to use more subtle language to convey it in a way that kink involved people can tell.

I got some I will try. Enjoy!

He slipped two fingers under my harness, tugging firmly, yet in a gentle fashion. "Not too tight, or not too loose, my darling?". "Yes", I replied, albeit in a non verbal manner, as sonar based communications would be unreliable in these conditions. Due to the interference, your voice will be distorted and muffled. I felt my harness securely hold me in place. It went criss cross around my chest, and twice under my crotch. It felt different to a car seatbelt. I knew this ride is going to be far more serious. I truely felt secure, safe and sound in that moment. As I wriggled I knew that I wasn't going anywhere. Even if I tried to hurt myself, I couldn't. My pilot and fiancee, Dominic Riggs briefly fixed my communication channel as he swiftly adjusted the strap on the back of my head. He says calmly, babe, are we ready for takeoff?". I reply, "Yes I am". Simultaneously, he put his hand into mine, and I responded by squeezing firmly, as both a romantic gesture and a standard safety protocol. He asks, for the last time, "Codename Bunny, confirm VTOL vertical takeoff!?". I knew now, I would be putting my life in his hands. Yet I was too excited for the ride and would not want to back down, after all this preparation. Right at this moment, my end of the communications system abruptly stopped working. This little red circular satelite thing apparently was causing the interference. However, I was relieved as I recognised his voice on the radio, "Hey babe, don't forget about the emergency parachute gestures". I felt like I was immediately lifted into the air. I was flying, and felt more free than ever before, despite the uncomfortable cockpit and the way it awkwardly contorted my body, still held in stringently by the harness. Suddenly, I was over taking other planes. Higher and higher I went. Far above any helicopter can go, far higher than Mt Everest, and higher than any commercial or even top military jets. Out of nowhere, I felt that SONIC BOOM, that cacophony of a crack like a cruel whip, smashing the sound barrier, as I am propelled even higher. My eyes rolled inwards and my brain was melting, as the G force was so great. It sent my ship spinning around and around, and my instruments into total discord. I was going even higher, past the ozone layer and into the stratosphere. I was almost out of the Earth's atmosphere. But I wasn't high enough to be in space. What do we call that? Well, I personally like to call that Sub-Space.

Thanks for experiencing my fantasy with me.


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AllieXBow wrote:I got some I will try. Enjoy!

He slipped two fingers under my harness, tugging firmly, yet in a gentle fashion. "Not too tight, or not too loose, my darling?". "Yes", I replied, albeit in a non verbal manner, as sonar based communications would be unreliable in these conditions. Due to the interference, your voice will be distorted and muffled. I felt my harness securely hold me in place. It went criss cross around my chest, and twice under my crotch. It felt different to a car seatbelt. I knew this ride is going to be far more serious. I truely felt secure, safe and sound in that moment. As I wriggled I knew that I wasn't going anywhere. Even if I tried to hurt myself, I couldn't. My pilot and fiancee, Dominic Riggs briefly fixed my communication channel as he swiftly adjusted the strap on the back of my head. He says calmly, babe, are we ready for takeoff?". I reply, "Yes I am". Simultaneously, he put his hand into mine, and I responded by squeezing firmly, as both a romantic gesture and a standard safety protocol. He asks, for the last time, "Codename Bunny, confirm VTOL vertical takeoff!?". I knew now, I would be putting my life in his hands. Yet I was too excited for the ride and would not want to back down, after all this preparation. Right at this moment, my end of the communications system abruptly stopped working. This little red circular satelite thing apparently was causing the interference. However, I was relieved as I recognised his voice on the radio, "Hey babe, don't forget about the emergency parachute gestures". I felt like I was immediately lifted into the air. I was flying, and felt more free than ever before, despite the uncomfortable cockpit and the way it awkwardly contorted my body, still held in stringently by the harness. Suddenly, I was over taking other planes. Higher and higher I went. Far above any helicopter can go, far higher than Mt Everest, and higher than any commercial or even top military jets. Out of nowhere, I felt that SONIC BOOM, that cacophony of a crack like a cruel whip, smashing the sound barrier, as I am propelled even higher. My eyes rolled inwards and my brain was melting, as the G force was so great. It sent my ship spinning around and around, and my instruments into total discord. I was going even higher, past the ozone layer and into the stratosphere. I was almost out of the Earth's atmosphere. But I wasn't high enough to be in space. What do we call that? Well, I personally like to call that Sub-Space.

Thanks for experiencing my fantasy with me.


Allie =)
Very good. Try to read it with both thoughts in your head (the vanilla and kinky at the same time). I laughed most at the depiction of vanilla reminiscent of those medieval armor with the word 'harness'. :rofl:
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Nice story, but not entirely what I meant. In your case you have to know that there is a kinky side. It doesn't go automatic. My idea is that children who don't know what kinky is and don't understand the terminology, they would read the story and don't feel uncomfortable. Those that are kinky minded will immediately read the story from a kinky point of view, while technically, the story isn't actually kinky.

This can be done by creating a narrative where something that we consider very kinky, is happening as a normal thing every day. All signs of people enjoying it are removed from the story, and there you go, you have a kinky story that can be read as normal story. All you need to ensure is that there is a proper explaination present why something is considered normal in the story. Those that are not kinky minded will follow along normally and enjoy the story as a casual read, whereas those that are kinky minded will get aroused from reading it as it drives their kinky mind.

A good example is this:

In kink, we like it when things are forced upon us. A crossdresser's kink dream would therefor be a story where they are forced to be clothed in the clothes by the opposite sex.
This can easily be justified by creating a scene where this happens by just explaining why it is happening in a normal matter.

For example:

Dave got an invitation for a party. The invitation explained going to a special club which required special clothing. Males were required to wear female clothes and females were required to wear male clothes. Make-up and wig were not required, but would give bonus points if used. More was going to be explained at the party.

<insert story about choosing clothing, getting make up and a wig, possibly even some side-story>

Dave goes to the party as female and meet the other guests who are all crossdressing, including the host. The entire party is lead to a bus and they drive off to another location. During the busride, the host explains that they are part of a science experiment and that there is no point of return. They are going to a party with 10000 people that are dressed normally, and they are going to spend a the whole day there clothed as the opposite sexes.

<insert some very kinky and humiliating moments>
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KinkInSpace wrote:Nice story, but not entirely what I meant. In your case you have to know that there is a kinky side. It doesn't go automatic. My idea is that children who don't know what kinky is and don't understand the terminology, they would read the story and don't feel uncomfortable. Those that are kinky minded will immediately read the story from a kinky point of view, while technically, the story isn't actually kinky.

This can be done by creating a narrative where something that we consider very kinky, is happening as a normal thing every day. All signs of people enjoying it are removed from the story, and there you go, you have a kinky story that can be read as normal story. All you need to ensure is that there is a proper explaination present why something is considered normal in the story. Those that are not kinky minded will follow along normally and enjoy the story as a casual read, whereas those that are kinky minded will get aroused from reading it as it drives their kinky mind.

A good example is this:

In kink, we like it when things are forced upon us. A crossdresser's kink dream would therefor be a story where they are forced to be clothed in the clothes by the opposite sex.
This can easily be justified by creating a scene where this happens by just explaining why it is happening in a normal matter.

For example:

Dave got an invitation for a party. The invitation explained going to a special club which required special clothing. Males were required to wear female clothes and females were required to wear male clothes. Make-up and wig were not required, but would give bonus points if used. More was going to be explained at the party.

<insert story about choosing clothing, getting make up and a wig, possibly even some side-story>

Dave goes to the party as female and meet the other guests who are all crossdressing, including the host. The entire party is lead to a bus and they drive off to another location. During the busride, the host explains that they are part of a science experiment and that there is no point of return. They are going to a party with 10000 people that are dressed normally, and they are going to spend a the whole day there clothed as the opposite sexes.

<insert some very kinky and humiliating moments>
Oh I get what you mean. I also had a fantasy where I'm a spy and have to go to a prison to extract information from a criminal mastermind. However, I'm a secret agent so not even the justice system knows our mission. It's inspired by a novel called Mad Dogs by Cherub. It goes into much detail on how James was restrained by handcuffs and leg irons and escorted to the prison. I found it hot, but it is normal to others. Is this what you mean?

Or another is that I am a CIA agent doing trials to see how long I would last in a CIA interrogation room for an experiment. However it goes wrong and something we didn't agree to happens...
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Yes, that's exactly what I mean. :)
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Ich habe alle 15 Geschichten über die Selfbondage-Box gelesen und mir haben die meisten davon sehr gefallen. Leider ist kaum ein Feedback unter den Geschichten zu lesen. Das ist sehr schade, denn jeder Schreiber möchte ja wissen, wie seine Geschichten ankommen. Von meiner Seit aus ein großes Kompliment.
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Sir Ellots wrote:Ich habe alle 15 Geschichten über die Selfbondage-Box gelesen und mir haben die meisten davon sehr gefallen. Leider ist kaum ein Feedback unter den Geschichten zu lesen. Das ist sehr schade, denn jeder Schreiber möchte ja wissen, wie seine Geschichten ankommen. Von meiner Seit aus ein großes Kompliment.
Translation : I have read all 15 stories about the selfbondage box and I really enjoyed most of them. Unfortunately, there is hardly any feedback under the stories. That's a shame, because every writer wants to know how their stories are received. A big compliment from my side.
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Fiction writers get the least amount of feedback here. I guess it takes a lot to offer an opinion without fearing that others may disagree, among other reasons. Is the view count a better gauge to judge value there?
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Die Anzahl der Aufrufe sagt nicht viel aus, denke ich. Es hängt immer von der Überschrift des Artikels ab. Je genauer die Überschrift etwas über den Inhalt aussagt, desto besser sagen die Anzahl der Aufrufe etwas über das Interesse der Leser aus.
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Sir Ellots wrote:Die Anzahl der Aufrufe sagt nicht viel aus, denke ich. Es hängt immer von der Überschrift des Artikels ab. Je genauer die Überschrift etwas über den Inhalt aussagt, desto besser sagen die Anzahl der Aufrufe etwas über das Interesse der Leser aus.
Translation : The number of views doesn't say much I guess. It always depends on the headline of the article. The more precisely the headline says something about the content, the better the number of views says something about the interest of the readers.
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I figure we have about 150 members that read every post here daily. Every time the post is replied to, we may get another 150. The rest may be repeat reader members, or guests that happen upon it by Google search.
I do agree, though, and wish that someone could encourage the authors with a thank you, or feedback reply.
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