Story going well
- curious_sb
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Story going well
Hi
I decided to post this separately to tray not to break the flow of the story so far...
Thanks to everyone thats taking part in the "create a story on the fly test post" it is so awesome.
I am collating all the responses into one seamless story and when we all mutually decide the story ends, We'll all have to vote on a suitable title for it and I will post the complete story in "Fictional Stories".
I guess we have a long way to go before it is publishable but the story is unfolding nicely, the best bit is none of us know how it is going to pan out, yet we all get a chance to steer it in a different direction. I wasn't sure if it would work so I posted in Everything else, but I think this ones going to be a hot topic actually.
Depending on the success of this one we could set off a few more but start them in the actual fictional stories section.
Also any one want s to leave feedback about teh story so far can we do it in here so as not to ruin the flow as it seems to be going quite nicely, cheers.
I decided to post this separately to tray not to break the flow of the story so far...
Thanks to everyone thats taking part in the "create a story on the fly test post" it is so awesome.
I am collating all the responses into one seamless story and when we all mutually decide the story ends, We'll all have to vote on a suitable title for it and I will post the complete story in "Fictional Stories".
I guess we have a long way to go before it is publishable but the story is unfolding nicely, the best bit is none of us know how it is going to pan out, yet we all get a chance to steer it in a different direction. I wasn't sure if it would work so I posted in Everything else, but I think this ones going to be a hot topic actually.
Depending on the success of this one we could set off a few more but start them in the actual fictional stories section.
Also any one want s to leave feedback about teh story so far can we do it in here so as not to ruin the flow as it seems to be going quite nicely, cheers.
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It is indeed awesome!
I agree that the suspense factor in this kind of story writing adds to the fun. Sometimes I wonder, where the heck is this going, then someone posts another sentence, and wow! Something completely unexpected. It's a real roller coaster ride and you never know where it's going next.
It is also interesting to see each member's contribution and how it reflects their personal fantasies and kinks, and how delightfully twisted we are!
Jenny.
I agree that the suspense factor in this kind of story writing adds to the fun. Sometimes I wonder, where the heck is this going, then someone posts another sentence, and wow! Something completely unexpected. It's a real roller coaster ride and you never know where it's going next.
It is also interesting to see each member's contribution and how it reflects their personal fantasies and kinks, and how delightfully twisted we are!
Jenny.
Helplessness is a doorway to the innermost reaches of the soul.
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
I totally agree. This was an excellent idea
Most excellent scenarios are when a lot of unexpected things happen during the scenario. It makes it so much more interesting and arousing. And this story will be filled with delicious unexpected turns...
This story will have bits and pieces of everyone's own little twisted minds
Each of us try to bring it back to something we are interested in, then see (read) it drift away, then we post again to direct it back to our interests... only to see it drift again. Oh this is a great idea indeed. Like they say in the Alexander beer commercial (made in NS, Canada) "Those who like it, like it a lot"!
I have a feeling, though, it might be a long time before we decide the story is finished
Most excellent scenarios are when a lot of unexpected things happen during the scenario. It makes it so much more interesting and arousing. And this story will be filled with delicious unexpected turns...
This story will have bits and pieces of everyone's own little twisted minds
Each of us try to bring it back to something we are interested in, then see (read) it drift away, then we post again to direct it back to our interests... only to see it drift again. Oh this is a great idea indeed. Like they say in the Alexander beer commercial (made in NS, Canada) "Those who like it, like it a lot"!
I have a feeling, though, it might be a long time before we decide the story is finished
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I agree on both counts.Michelle wrote:The "one phrase" limit is not as obvious as I thought it would be.
But I think it makes the story more interesting
Our lovely victim is really getting the works! Poor thing...
Can't decide if I want to inflict or endure... massive inner conflict...
Jenny.
Helplessness is a doorway to the innermost reaches of the soul.
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
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I'm LOVING this story, its going so well its starting to give me a semi. LOL the suspense is killing me, and I have only limited control over the storyline. and its surprisingly GOOD, considering it was a concept I thought I'd try as a test.
I kind of feel like I am in mental bondage as I have no control over what happens next, its awesome.
I'm still collating all the contributions into a seamless story, it really is fantastic, thanks to everyone taking part.
I kind of feel like I am in mental bondage as I have no control over what happens next, its awesome.
I'm still collating all the contributions into a seamless story, it really is fantastic, thanks to everyone taking part.
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I was waiting for someone to send the story on its way again, but four days have passed! I succumbed and left question marks in our helpless victim's head that I hope someone else will answer...
Jenny.
Jenny.
Helplessness is a doorway to the innermost reaches of the soul.
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
If my corset isn't tight, it just isn't right!
Kink is the spice of life!
Come to the Dark Side - we have cookies!
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So... where is the "Story so far..." posted???
Would be nice to see it all in one place...
Would be nice to see it all in one place...
All advice is checked, re-checked and verified to be questionable...
Don't ask, we both wont understand the answer...
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http://forum.boundanna.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1182Dark_Lizerd wrote:So... where is the "Story so far..." posted???
Would be nice to see it all in one place...
Looking forward to your input Dark_Lizerd
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Consolated...
ie:
"It was cold, dark, and she could feel the ropes on her ankles and wrists holding her down, she didn't know where she was or how she got there.
The only sounds she could hear were her own breaths and of drops of water falling into a puddle nearby.
She tried to stand up to see any familiar landscape, and that is when she realized that her vision had been reduced to a mere glaze, by what seemed to be a pantyhose mask!
Then sudenly a dog barks nearby!"
....
ie:
"It was cold, dark, and she could feel the ropes on her ankles and wrists holding her down, she didn't know where she was or how she got there.
The only sounds she could hear were her own breaths and of drops of water falling into a puddle nearby.
She tried to stand up to see any familiar landscape, and that is when she realized that her vision had been reduced to a mere glaze, by what seemed to be a pantyhose mask!
Then sudenly a dog barks nearby!"
....
All advice is checked, re-checked and verified to be questionable...
Don't ask, we both wont understand the answer...
http://www.mediafire.com/download/09dtr ... e_V2_2.exe Not just for nubies any more...
Don't ask, we both wont understand the answer...
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I will set up a locked topic in "Fictional stories" that only I can update, that will have the story so far as one chunk.Robin wrote:curious_sb ?
Here it is:...
http://forum.boundanna.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1245
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Thanks, that is what I was asking about....
All advice is checked, re-checked and verified to be questionable...
Don't ask, we both wont understand the answer...
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Re: Story going well
Thank you.curious_sb wrote: I decided to post this separately to tray not to break the flow of the story so far...