A Complete Surprise

[kosvince]

I have started to read this and I liked it from the start.

I will PM you to ask for you authorization to publish this on my website.

A pleasure to read it either way, keep it cuming

[Zubba1]

I have started to read this and I liked it from the start.

I will PM you to ask for you authorization to publish this on my website.

A pleasure to read it either way, keep it cuming

I replied to you, and ping me back.

Meanwhile for all the readers, I am going to most likely close this thread, as I decided on some changes to the story. And to clean up the things I was pointed out as well as the NUMEROUS things I found.

I will repost the new version of it, in time, shouldn't be too long.